Poetry Game


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tanthalis

-san
Kouhai
[Rules were discussed and decided on by Bold and I, please follow them]
Okay, here we go!
I'm making this thread for some of the poetic people out there.
I'll start by giving you some words.. between 4 or 8 of them.

Then someone will write a poem and post it. Along with that post, they will give another set of words. And so on and so forth. Only the words in the post directly after the last post will be used in the next one. So if you post at the same time as someone else, whoever is on top gets the cookie! And you got to share your poetry anyway.

oh yeah... NORMAL FORUM RULES APPLY

It doesn't matter your poetry style. Whether it is verse or prose. Also, you can change the tense of the word. [ex. "Rake" can be used as "Raking" or "Rakes"]
You must use EVERY word, but they do not have to be used in the order given.

Please do not give words that do not have a rhyme, such as "silver" and "orange"
I'll keep it relatively easy for this first one..

www.dictionary.com is your friend.. use it if you don't know some of the words

Edit: If you post after someone else already posted, please edit the words out of your post.

The first set of words are:
Blood
Crystal
Blade
Moon
Life
 
Blood of Crystal
Blade of Crystal

The moon shines on its children
Life of human souls
Happiness without sacrifices
Happiness withour regrets

We are all children,
Looking a for a present
The present of our blood
The present of our heart
Our shiny heart of crystal

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new words:

Birds
Happiness
Magic castle
figth
future
 
QUOTE (Bold @ Feb 8 2006, 10:12 PM) Birds
next time.. no word pairs.. "Magic castle" separate them next time.

Happiness
Magic castle
figth
future
Birds sit in my window.
Speaking of happiness.
I shall never know.
A magic castle I guess.
This place where I fight.
My life is full of plight,
My future is never in sight.

New words:
Lift
Rake
Heart
Maw
Void
 
QUOTE Birds
Happiness
Magic castle
figth
future

Okey lets see~

When the world is silent…
And no one there around me..
I was sitting in my room..
Imaging my magic castle..

The imagination of my love..
While he will hold me..
And dance with my while looking in my eyes..
I should find the happiness there…
But I will wait for that day..
The day when I will be with you..
I should to fight for my dreams…
For my future….

And then when I will be with you..
The birds will start to sing again..
We don’t need music..
we need each other..

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new words:-
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<---- Mod's order~ (Bold)
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As an example, we shall use the above.
Since my post was first... the words from mine will be used.
However.. nice poem Tomo
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Edit: Yo don't have to delete it... it can stay there.. but if you want to edit out the words...
 
QUOTE (tanthalis @ Feb 8 2006, 10:18 PM)
New words:
Lift
Rake
Heart
Maw
Void
Sorry tomo, Tanthalis said I have to do his
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I was Raking my garden
on such a moonlit night
depressed about that
which we call life
that is when I heard it
that sweet hope of
my Heart

It rode up on a horse
darker then night and
it came for me to get my life

I was free, my soul was free
but no, I was not free
I was sucked in to its Maw
Maw that is the dark Void

But then down came the angels
into the void, to Lift me up
into the heaven.

Its bad I know but here's the next words

Love
Happines
Life
Darkness
Death
 
QUOTE (neutrality @ Feb 8 2006, 11:14 PM) Sorry tomo, Tanthalis said I have to do his
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Baaaaaka.. I didn't say you had to do mine.. the rules Bold and I agreed upon said you had to do mine.

Also: Since I have practice doing this kind of thing under a time limit, I'm going to only post every few things or so.. unless one sits there too long... That will allow more people to get in without having to use my challenging and uninspiring multimeaning words. Good luck
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Love
Happines
Life
Darkness
Death
--

To love is to be happy
To live is to be happy
To live is to love
To love is to live

No one truly lived until they loved
A love that will ligthen all the darkness
A love that will endure
A love in which you will grow
A love that not eve death can break

Always by your side,
I shall stand by you, until my last breath,
Even after that, I shall wait for you.

--
New words:

Sword
Flying carpet
Princess
Horse
Sky
 
QUOTE (neutrality @ Feb 9 2006, 09:14 AM) Sorry tomo, Tanthalis said I have to do his
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I know that neutrality!!!!
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he also asked Bold to remove my words~
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Nice poetry neutrality~
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also Bold~
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QUOTE (Bold @ Feb 9 2006, 08:10 AM) New words:

Sword
Flying carpet
Princess
Horse
Sky
A sword seeking flesh
Covered in darkness
A failing flying carpet
Falling from the sky
A princess shouts
Reaching for the horse

A strangled scream
Her bloody corpse falls

New words:
Death
Eternity
Passion
Anger
Hate
 
QUOTE (Daedroth @ Feb 9 2006, 12:25 AM) Death
Eternity
Passion
Anger
Hate
The fires of Passion burn,
But to the flames of anger they turn.
In eternity, a battle of love and hate.
Death can bring no solice.
Will my thoughts be ever amiss?
Can such a war ever abate?

New words:
Safety
Love
Minute
Angel
Sky
 
Here is Mine~
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QUOTE Safety
Love
Minute
Angel
Sky
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The first time I saw you my love..
I fall in love with you..
With your eyes..
With your smile…

For minute I thought you are an angel..
Came from the sky…
With dark black eyes..
With an angelic words..
I felt so pleased
so Safety…
From the cruel world…

Could you be an angel?...
Who came to save me?..
I can’t believe a human..
Have this affects on me??..
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New Words:-

Love
Faith
Trust
Future
You
Me
 
QUOTE (tomo @ Feb 9 2006, 09:10 AM) New Words:-

Love
Faith
Trust
Future
You
Me
My hatred runs deep
My love for chaos
Lost all faith
seeking existance
You broke my trust
Betrayed me and ran
Someday i'll catch up
And give you a hand

There is but one future
The future in a grave
Death loves all
No matter your fame

New Words:
Tears
Cloud
Shadow
Earth
Spirit
 
I think someone is kind of twisting Tomo's words
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But it is part of the game.

Tears
Cloud
Shadow
Earth
Spirit
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When I see her,
I want to smile,
Smile until there are tears in my eyes
Tears of joy

My spirit will run free,
Walking along side of her's
Two shadows,
Two humans,
Two lovers.

Always protecting one another,
Always watching the back of the other,
Making sure nothing happens
While we are on this lonely earth,
As long as she is there,
No shadow could obscure my heart

--
New words:
Music
Work
Seeking
Drawing
Sun
Moon
 
QUOTE (Bold @ Feb 9 2006, 02:07 PM) New words:
Music
Work
Seeking
Drawing
Sun
Moon
Thousand slaugthered children
Their screams like music in my ears
While working with their tones
I'll show them true fear

A scorching sun of flames
On their bodies crash
A dark moonlit night
Showing all their ash

Drawing this perfect picture
Showing glorious pain
Seeking endless pleasure
The work of someone slain

New words:
Pleasure
Bane
Laughter
Fantasy
Monkey
 
There was a monkey
A monkey with a donkey
Sharing pleasurable laughter
And a ur-bane fantasy

New Words:
Peaceful
Unbelievable
Unbreakable
Desirable
 
Peaceful
Unbelievable
Unbreakable
Desirable
---

So unbelivable, to feel the way I do
So unbelivale, I never want it to stop
I want this to be unbreakable,
Never letting go of my peace
Never letting go of my desire

Simply be at peace,
SImply enjoy the present moment
Working hard to preserve it,
Making it last

So unbelivable

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New words:
Ethics
Reflection
Hope
Gloomy day
Rising sun
 
QUOTE (Bold @ Feb 9 2006, 06:36 PM) New words:
Ethics
Reflection
Hope
Gloomy day
Rising sun
Here is mine~
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In a Gloomy day… looking at my Reflection at mirror
I see in my eyes that I truly lost my merrier ..

I lost my hope and my trust in people..
When they lost their Ethics..

Still can’t believe it.. how things turn to be so cruel…
And now am wondering if the sun may rise again…

Its still short hmm~I couldn't write Lovo poem since there is Ethics XD

New Words:-
far away~
hardness
sadness
meet
eyes~
 
There is "something" far away~
Can't bear the hardness of reaching "it"
But
Sadness is reaching me
While
I meet a special person
His eyes~ are telling me
That
He reached that "something"

don't know if that makes sense...
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New Words:
Sorrow
Fragments
Life
Death
 
QUOTE (Ultima @ Feb 9 2006, 05:56 PM) New Words:
Sorrow
Fragments
Life
Death
My first time...
It felt so good
My first kill...
I felt it
A fragment of my soul ripped out
This was the pain i sought
This was the suffering i wanted
This deep, deep sorrow
Taking a life
And giving it to death
My first time...

New words:
Electricity
Sound
Voice
Weapon
Banana
 
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